Ryan, it is good that you have met the deadline, however you have done it with very little style and finesse. My job is to advise you as to how to go about achieving the best grade you can and your job is to listen - if you choose not to take this advice, you will not meet the grade. Your blog lacks any depth in explanation and looks very tardy this is evidence not of a student who is incapable, but of one who is lazy and doesn't put the effort in. Meeting a deadline does not mean chugging out a load of poor quality work in order to meet a tick list, which is what you have done. You must do the following before you can move on from the planning phase: 1) re-draw all of your flat plans and use a ruler, include lots of details about layout that imply you have thought and taken care/time over your work. 2) Do the same for your shot list 3) Develop your customer profile and don't use a picture of a famous person, that is ridiculous. 4)Develop your montage and actually put comments on it as to why you have included certain images and what is influential/striking about the images. 5)Analyse the results of your q'aire and put a copy of it on your blog - if you do not say how this research will influence your work, what was the point in doing it. Your work lies somewhere between a level 2/3 at the moment, but you could easily be a level 3. I don't want to hear from you in my lessons until you meet this criteria. Happy New Year. Miss L
Ryan, it is good that you have met the deadline, however you have done it with very little style and finesse. My job is to advise you as to how to go about achieving the best grade you can and your job is to listen - if you choose not to take this advice, you will not meet the grade. Your blog lacks any depth in explanation and looks very tardy this is evidence not of a student who is incapable, but of one who is lazy and doesn't put the effort in. Meeting a deadline does not mean chugging out a load of poor quality work in order to meet a tick list, which is what you have done.
ReplyDeleteYou must do the following before you can move on from the planning phase:
1) re-draw all of your flat plans and use a ruler, include lots of details about layout that imply you have thought and taken care/time over your work.
2) Do the same for your shot list
3) Develop your customer profile and don't use a picture of a famous person, that is ridiculous.
4)Develop your montage and actually put comments on it as to why you have included certain images and what is influential/striking about the images.
5)Analyse the results of your q'aire and put a copy of it on your blog - if you do not say how this research will influence your work, what was the point in doing it.
Your work lies somewhere between a level 2/3 at the moment, but you could easily be a level 3. I don't want to hear from you in my lessons until you meet this criteria. Happy New Year. Miss L